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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Mon May 3 02:24:23 EDT 2004
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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Mon May 3 06:09:30 EDT 2004
Please read the headings as
" Emotionally Created Poems"
- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Mon May 3 06:09:42 EDT 2004
Please read the headings as
" Emotionally Created Poems"
- From: geno (@ 61.2.225.34)
on: Fri May 7 07:24:31 EDT 2004
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- From: geno (@ 61.2.225.34)
on: Fri May 7 07:25:23 EDT 2004
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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Mon May 10 06:44:15 EDT 2004
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- From: k.sudhakar(srimangai) (@ sngiapat1.net.asiapac.agilent.com)
on: Mon May 10 08:34:49 EDT 2004
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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Mon May 10 10:34:58 EDT 2004
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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Wed May 12 08:12:11 EDT 2004
It seems Like there is nobody whom i can submit this !!!!!!
- From: k.sudhakar(srimangai) (@ sngiapat1.net.asiapac.agilent.com)
on: Wed May 12 09:12:11 EDT 2004
jesee
I had seen this poem. I needed to go through it carefully before I write my comments. Your poem is challenging.. hence the delay.
jesse, your poems are of a different class- having a dimension which portrays the pains and it's cause and effects in other dimensions. ÀÊÁõ ¸¨Ä¼Š§¸¡ô-À¢ý À¢õÀí¸û §À¡Ä ÀÄŨ¸¸Ç¢ø Ţ⸢ÈÐ.
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- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Wed May 12 10:33:34 EDT 2004
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- From: test (@ )
on: Tue May 25 16:54:40
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- From: K.Sudhakar ( srimangai) (@ sngiapat1.net.asiapac.agilent.com)
on: Mon May 31 00:58:53 EDT 2004
Jesse,
There is something unique which I have felt in your poems... The feelings are in one level and the "feelings on the feelings"( am I confusing clearly?!) are in other dimensions. This is not an universal happening in other poems.
I have a suggestion - may be you can cut on the adjectives..( "maamisa moolayil" can still be Moolayil and give the same impact"). Hope you do not mind my suggestions.
anpudan
srimangai
- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Tue Jun 1 09:01:42 EDT 2004
Hi ,(I dont know how to call u . Sudhakar or Srimangai)
Its really appreciating me the comments u feed in about my poems .As u said , Yes I usually weave my poems on a set of feelings rather than generic things or those which are happening (¿¢¸ú׸û) .
Basically some of my poems are those which I speak to my own soul. Criticising The way he tend to be, the way it is . It is some thing like worrying about one's own Children even though one have to accept abt the way they grow up .
Abt adjectives , ye I would like to do that . But some times they give some sort of sync with previous and following lines . I dont want it to be too much descriptive but a bit so that the reader can easily get a grip or interest in the poem .
Am I confusing ????
- From: test (@ )
on: Wed Jun 16 13:27:34
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- From: geno (@ 61.2.32.55)
on: Mon Aug 2 05:54:25 EDT 2004
Jesee please continue to write your uniquely perspective kavithaikaL :=)
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